Thomas Downing

USA

jgriffiths@bc3.cc.pa.us

Women in Doorways

Women relish the hushed absence of men.

Our desire for them in temporary abeyance

unwatched unappraised unafraid unknown

they celebrate in more ways than we know.

Like Hopper’s yellow-haired prairie queen

exempt buttons undone naked now and then

they noon pose in shadowed doorways

fusing sunlight and flesh -- scenting wind.

Midnight they loll sipping warm lazy rain

tracing trees tapping leaves trading places

posing in wine-shadowed doorways naked

tasting and fingering long slow rivulets from God.

Women cherish the hushed absence of men:

it is not always us they are thinking of.

 

How Does Edward Hopper Know?

How do you know

Edward Hopper

painter of real

women

alone

 

look like this

have looked like this

will look like this

instant stopped

crawling into bed

standing in doorways

or rocking in Brooklyn

when any pose at all

draped or nude

mute or sassy

is at least

a whispered imposition

touched with fraud

if done for money

or whipped from color wheels

and your imagination?

Daddy-long-legs

I

Sixteen legs thin like thread

intruded

office in overnight

arachnid trespassers

husband and wife?

establishing residence

distracting me

morning driven

report not done

spun silk linked to Erie fields

and cranky Northgate grass

Tilford, Freddy, and me

our mothers ----------phobic

what we couldn’t say nor spell

in house chased

finger smashed

how we earned our mothers’ praise

and sifted golden cakes

II

Sat down later

dad straightened out

reducing bit by bit what we didn’t know

we didn’t know


No No No No Huh?

we wouldn’t like it if

stronger strangers tore our legs off

laughed if we cripple walked

ripped up our tents we labored long to make

what a black widow

a venomous concern

looked like

if we fell over it

or the days we’d waste

on women’s fears

and manliness

times we’d sift for ourselves

Daddy-long-legs

seeking golden space.

© Copyright, 2000, John Griffiths (Thomas Downing).
All Rights Reserved. Printed By Permission.